brass ring

“hands”
Image via Magpie Tales

thumpa da
thump

i catch myself
caught up

in our spinning
rhythm go round

merrily galloping, we
bright, sweet, lovely

you then me
you then me

조금
jogeum
조금
jogeum

경주
gyeongju
경주
gyeongju

together
we lace

restless
thoroughbred

thundering
pulses

one
strong

infinite
loop

Rene ~ January 20, 2013

For Magpie Tales 152

and D’verse Poets Poetics: Foreign tongue

my foreign words are:

조금  jogeum,  the Korean word for chasing
경주  gyeongju, the Korean word for racing

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14 thoughts on “brass ring

  1. smiles….makes me think of kids running free through a field…holding hands…maybe kinda like the opening of little house…you know…smiles. nice us of sound, and i like the single thread…

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