Be that
heartbeat
like music to my ears
one that makes me sing
harmony
playfully
around an upright piano
or tangled up in the sheets
Be that
sinful filling
in my cupcake
the one worth the weight
naughtily
teasing me
away from the 9 to 5
and into your wicked game
Be that
welcomed back rub
on weary shoulders
the kind that never ends
miraculously
fixing me
kneading my troubles gone
as fast as your hands can
Be that
one true, fine
love i let in
the kind that builds up
constantly
unconditionally
bathing lost, abandoned corners
in undying perfect light
Rene ~ February 3, 2013
If February makes you shiver,
get under those covers and dream 🙂
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| Central Library, Manchester, UK , Robin Gosnall |
For:
100 Word Song-
this weeks song prompt
“Strength” by The Alarm
Poets United and
d’Verse Poets #Open Link Nite
Phew!
I really like this!!! The second stanza was perfect!!!
Great piece!
Never has a better love song been penned. You rock this, Rene!
This is wonderful. I want one too!
Curious and dreamlike. Quite enjoyable…
this is lovely!
I loved this Rene! Just a fabulous write!
smiles…i hope they are that for you…love the elements you chose…the back rub and cake….and the music of the heartbeat…sounds like the ingredients to a fine love to me…smiles.
very nice, I really like it!
I like this one!McGuffy's Readerhttp://www.mcguffysreader.blogspot.com
Very beautifully written!
Felt good reading this poem. Very dream like.
Very nice, Rene…
yummy poem like the seductiveness you bring in 🙂
naughtilyteasing meaway from the 9 to 5and into your wicked gameHas that playful feel, Rene! Someone is not reporting for work but staying home for some fun! Nicely!Hank
If in doubt always remember the bees , all four of them
Perfect, and I especially loved the 3rd stanza.
A perfect Valentine!
each of these are excellent, personally I like the second one the best, but all are great. Thanks