vernal

unsprung
kick the bars down
set on fire the grey sails
scream technicolor,wake the skies
riot bright

Rene ~ March 14, 2013
For d’Verse Poets Pub – Form For All~Cinquain

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19 thoughts on “vernal

  1. scream technicolor wake the sky…haha i like line…think i might drop a comma or some punctuation in the middle of it…unless you meant it one thought…i read two there though…i like the intensity though in it…come on spring!

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